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Tuesday, 22 August 2017

Music Performance

  1. What song did you choose?
  • Closer by chainsmoker or Frozen Let it go

2. What is the song about?
The Chainsmokers dropped "Closer" four weeks ago, and it's blown up. The song has over 150 million listens on Spotify and nearly the same amount of views on YouTube. It's currently the top song on the Billboard Hot 100, and it looks like it's going to be there for a while.
“Let It Go,” the most popular song from Disney’s 2013 animated musical Frozen, has been a smashing success. On YouTube the song has reached almost 160,000,000 views, at the 86th Academy Awards it won the award for Best Original Song, and it is the first song from a Disney animated musical to reach the top ten of the Billboard Hot 100 since 1995. But Beyond that, nearly everyone that I know has at least most of the song memorized.

3. Why did you change that song?

Tuesday, 1 August 2017

ASSESSMENT ON THE OUTSIDER

2017 Year 10 Written Text Assessment on ‘The Outsiders’
QUESTIONS (Choose ONE)
1. Describe at least one important relationship in the written text(s). Explain how this relationship positively or negatively influenced one or more characters.
2. Describe at least one important setting in the written text(s). Explain how the setting helped you to understand at least one idea. Note: “Setting” may refer to physical places as well as social and historical contexts.
3. Describe at least one important character in the written text(s). Explain how the character changes throughout the text(s).
4. Describe an important conflict in the written text. Explain how the conflict helped you to understand an important message.
5. Describe an incident that changes the course of events in the written text(s). Explain how this change helped you to understand an important idea.
6. Describe at least one important technique used in the written text(s). Explain how the use of the technique created impact. Note: Techniques could include figures of speech, syntax, word-choice, style, symbolism, structure, or narrative point-of-view.





And don’t forget the GOLDEN rules:
G ather ideas: who? what? when? where? why? how?
O rganise them: what’s the best order?
L ink ideas or paragraphs: “Not only do we learn…, but also…  .”
D escriptive words: stunning, exquisite, brilliant, excellent
E nabling words or phrases: for example, for instance, we see this     when, as an illustration, to demonstrate
N eat and tidy: punctuation, grammar, spelling


Statement about the  written text technique/aspect
Evidence from the written text
Explanation of the meaning shown in relation to the question
Explanation of author’s purpose
Your link to the human experience (self, society, or world)
(A) within ‘The Outsiders’
(B) another  novel  
(C) another text
Sentence Starters:





For example,

For instance,

We see this when,

This is demonstrated,
This shows…

This makes the audience think…

This makes the audience feel…

This makes us understand…
S.E.Hinton did this to

The purpose of this

This was done to



This aspect can be compared to…
This aspect can be contrasted to…
This can be juxtaposed to…
This reminds me of...
Examples:

In Macbeth by William Shakespeare, dialogue was used to show the state of  Macbeth’s mind.




For instance, the line “Is this a dagger I see before me?” demonstrates Macbeth questioning  his reality.
This technique reveals Macbeth’s character  by showing the audience that he has started to hallucinate and that his mind is playing tricks on him, or, alternatively, that the witches are having more influence on him than he realises.  
Shakespeare did this to show the consequences of Macbeth’s guilty actions. As the play progresses, Macbeth’s mind becauses more troubled and Shakespeare uses Macbeth’s  dialogue, actions, and the conversations of other to reflect this.
This dialogue  can be juxtaposed with the feast when he has a visitation of Banquo’s ghost and says “Then comes my fit again: I had else been perfect”. This highlights, to some degree, the fact that Macbeth is conscious of his hallucinations. However, a characteristic of insanity is the insane person not knowing that are in fact insane and by the end of the play, Macbeth no longer knows what is real and what is imagined around him. This highlights the fact that guilt through murder and ‘unfettered’ ambition can affect the state of people's’ minds.














Statement about the  written text technique/aspect
Evidence from the written text
Explanation of the meaning shown  in relation to the question
Explanation of author’s purpose
Your link to the human experience (self, society, or world)
(A) within ‘The Outsiders’
(B) another  novel  
(C) another text
Sentence Starters:





For example,

For instance,

We see this when,

This is demonstrated,
This shows…

This makes the audience think…

This makes the audience feel…

This makes us understand…
The author did this to

The purpose of this

This was done to



This aspect can be compared to…
This aspect can be contrasted to…
This can be juxtaposed to…
This reminds me of...
In the SEXXXY template below, answer ONE of the following questions:

I am answering question number:
Copy and paste your question here:
Planning
Gather and Order ideas:






Introduction:
(Optional)






SEXXXY 1

When johnny want to bleach ponyboy hair


For example johnny want to take of the grease out of ponyboy hair so that they can’t recognise them


This makes us understand that johnny want to hide what happened when he stabbed bob


This was done to not going johnny to jail and have freedom


This reminds me of. If there is one who committed crime they are always running away.
SEXXXY 2

When darry killed by the police because he pointed a gun at the man


For example. When johnny died dally committed crime because he can’t live without johnny


This makes the audience think that he want to stay with johnny whenever he was


the author did this to
To show us do not committed crime


This reminds me of that when someone died they want to commit crime so that they can stay together
SEXXXY 3

When ponyboy helped the children on the burning church


We see this when the teacher said “ there are still more kids inside”


This shows us the ponyboy have the courage to save the kids for not burning them alive


the author did this to
Teach us to be a hero and save other kid’s life


This reminds me of the firemen have to to save the child from burning house
SEXXXY 4

When johnny and ponyboy saw the mustang coming at their territory


For example ponyboy see the mustang coming and ponyboy said to johnny “ try to look cool johnny “


This shows us that they have a courage to stand their territory whatever it cost


This was done to


Conclusion:

(Optional)